
Have you ever bought a How to for dummies book or a survival guide to something? Are you afraid of a zombie apocalypse? Did you like Cheers? If you answered yes to these questions then you’ll probably love Zombie land. It’s a clever comedy about a very eccentric group of people trying to survive. The main character is a neurotic loner named
Seemed a bit rushed and could have used more opinion. Other than that, nice job. Liked your intro.
ReplyDeleteThe beginning was a little odd and didn't really flow well. It would have been a great review if you had clarified the intro a little more and added your opinion
ReplyDeleteI thought your intro was interesting but your conclusion kind of fell apart at the end. Made it seem like the last few sentences were thrown in to get to that 100 word mark rather than having some thought put into it.
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